[Normal] [F/F] [Tentacles] [Rape]
Author: DarkJester
Description: After being humiliated by Twilight Sparkle, Trixie is determined to get revenge, and she finds just the spell to help her do so.
Clop Rating: 5
Additional Tags: Twilight Sparkle, Trixie, Tentacles, Rape
NSFW picture / Sequel after the break.
[Normal] [Grimdark] [F/F] [Tentacles] [Rape]
Author: DarkJester
Description: Now that the tables have turned it is time for the Great and Powerless Trixie to suffer!Clop Rating: 5
Twilight's Revenge
Pretty great story, not too much torture and not too little :D
ReplyDeletePart 1 was fun in as silly hentai style "I punish you with orgasms!" fantasy rape fantasy way.
ReplyDeletePart 2 kinda killed it for me. I was expecting something like Twi proving her magical dominance over Trixie, then proving her sexual dominance.
Instead I got BDSM orgasm denial, hardcore painfucking, sexual-sadist Twilight and an evil Tyrant Celestia who rapes her own guardponies to death. Wat.
That was so OOC for Twi. She's suppost to teach lessons, not get revenge. Plus Trixie didn't learn ANYTHING this way other than "Don't mess with Twilight". She WAS getting somewhere, but now she's just back to being angry at her.
I was hoping the tables would be turned from Trixie being jealous and resentful of Twi to longing and remorse, oh well.
Also these should be clop rating 4 not 5 because although it is very cloppy the genitals are not described, only bluntly stated.
ReplyDeleteYou know what you like don't you DPV111 don't ya
ReplyDelete^I...guess?
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